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awesome story

"This story is shaping up to be the greatest one yet. I will read further once I have time. Your paragraphs are long, it will take me a while to get past chapter 1, but overall, great story so far."

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Surrender The Light

"What I initially thought was to be a short story, turned into a tour de force! I have never read anything quite like this. Judging by wet cheeks that appeared several times during your narrative, I was more affected than I thought I'd be. True unselfish love saves a world at high cost, and is rewarded in an unexpected way - a satisfying fantasy. Thank you for sharing it with us."

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