Amy v.R

"Really enjoying this. Your writing in some way reminds me of my own. Love that you lay alot out at the start because thats what keeps you hooked wanting to read more. I'v picked up best sellers that are unable to maintain my attention this far. As my little piece of feedback I think the first few paragraps focus too much on internal dialoge about emotions and tears but otherwise I think you've done a really awesome job. Please keep writing. :)"