๐™Ž๐™–๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™˜ ๐™ข๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ Loki (Discontinued) by ElaraWrites at Inkitt
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๐™Ž๐™–๐™ฉ๐™–๐™ฃ๐™ž๐™˜ ๐™ข๐™ž๐™ฃ๐™™๐™จ -Loki - (DISCONTINUED)

Summary

She escaped HYDRA with assassin skills, chaos magic, and a target on her back. Heโ€™s the trickster on probation who should be the last person she trusts. Sparks fly at a Stark gala, missions turn flirty and lethal, and when the tension snapsโ€ฆ itโ€™s on the page and on fire. Satanic Minds is enemies-to-lovers, MCU banter, and a powerhouse heroine who chooses love without losing her edge.

Status
1yr ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter One โ€” Brake Lights & Bad Decisions


The hallway lights didnโ€™t buzz so much as seetheโ€”cold, insect-bright and humming like a toothache. Brooke Archers kept her back to the wall and her eyes on the corner cameraโ€™s lazy blink. One, twoโ€ฆ dead pixelโ€ฆ now.

She moved.

Three steps to the keypad, two fingers to pop the metal face, a twist with a scavenged paperclip, and the lock coughed open. Her breath fogged the inside of the stolen mask. She didnโ€™t want to breathe the air in HYDRA labs without a filter, not after the things theyโ€™d aerosolized into people. Not after the label theyโ€™d stamped on every file with her number on it: S-MIND.

Alarms stayed mercifully asleep. Either she was getting good or they were getting sloppy. She hoped for the first. Sloppy meant overconfidence; HYDRA didnโ€™t do overconfidence. They did redundancies, and those were worse.

A pair of white coats came around the bend, splitting a conversation about sigma values and compliance curves. Brooke pulled a gasket-black thread of power into her palmโ€”her power didnโ€™t look like fire or light. It looked like the absence of both, like a seam cut into the worldโ€”and pinched the shadow on the floor. The hallway dimmed for a second. The men blinked, confused, then kept walking, eyes sliding past where she was not.

She let them pass, fingers shaking when she released the thread. Using it always tasted like pennies at the back of her throat. Not now, she told herself. Not unless it mattered.

The exit door at the end of the service corridor had a push bar and a sign that lied: NO EXIT. Beyond it was night. Real night. Cold air. City noise, the kind of busy sound that didnโ€™t belong to HYDRAโ€™s metronome of footsteps and clipped orders.

Brooke shoved the bar and stumbled into the world.

Her stolen boots slapped asphalt. She tore the mask off and gulped oxygen like a starving thing. The lab squatted behind her in the industrial shadow of a shipping yard, a building trying to pass as boring. Fitting. HYDRA loved to hide in plain sight.

She didnโ€™t run so much as ricochet, bouncing off chain link, tripping over an abandoned pallet, then catching herself with muscle memory and stubbornness. She needed distance. By the time they realized she was gone, she needed to be a problem with blur lines.

โ€œLeft,โ€ she told herself, because panic loved straight lines. โ€œLeft and then left again, and thenโ€”โ€

Headlights bloomed like a sunrise at street level, sudden and close. Tires sang against wet pavement. A low-slung car took the corner faster than common sense.

Brookeโ€™s body decided before her brain did. She darted into the street.

The carโ€™s grill filled her vision in an instant: a gleaming silver smile with too many teeth. An emblemโ€”four ringsโ€”flashed. There was enough time to think wow, thatโ€™s expensive before time tried to tear itself in half.

Brakes screamed. The car fishtailed with controlled fury, stopping a breath and a bump of air from her knees. The world snapped back in shards: rain freckles on the hood, the smell of hot rubber, the stereo blurting an offended trumpet line.

โ€œFRIDAY,โ€ a voice said, low, irritated, and familiar in the way billboards are familiar. โ€œRemind me to install a pedestrian net.โ€

A car door flipped up like a wing. A man unfolded himself out of the driverโ€™s seat: dark suit, dark hair, brighter eyes. The goatee was a signature. The posture was a brand.

โ€œOkay,โ€ he announced to the general situation, hands in the international gesture for whoa. โ€œEither youโ€™re the most committed insurance scammer Iโ€™ve ever met, or somebody forgot to paint a crosswalk on my personal racetrack.โ€

Brookeโ€™s brain supplied a label through the adrenaline haze: Tony Stark. Heโ€™d looked taller on magazine covers but only because the fonts were smaller. In person he wasโ€ฆ present. Dialed to eleven. The kind of man who made any room look like it was trying out for him.

Her knees unlocked the hard way. She stumbled to the curb, palms on thighs, half-laughing, half-sucking air. The laugh came out cracked. โ€œWhich option gets me the net?โ€

โ€œBold. I like that.โ€ Starkโ€™s gaze flicked down her borrowed hospital shoes, up the threadbare hoodie, lingering one heartbeat too long on the cuff criss-crossed with hospital tape. He didnโ€™t miss details. โ€œYou bleeding?โ€

โ€œOnly on the inside,โ€ she said, and instantly regretted the truth of it.

He tilted his head. The rain decided to commit. It dotted his shoulders, beading on the car like an ad campaign. โ€œName, not-insurance-scammer?โ€

โ€œBrooke.โ€ She swallowed. She wasnโ€™t giving the last name in a streetlight. Not with the lab door behind her and the world suddenly, terrifyingly open.

โ€œNice to meet you, Brooke Not-Insurance-Scammer.โ€ He jerked his chin toward the passenger side. โ€œGet in. Before one of the fine upstanding citizens of New York realizes I left a window of vulnerability here and steals my rims.โ€

The lab door behind her clicked. Brooke didnโ€™t look. She didnโ€™t need to. The hairs on her arms knew what that sound meant.

Her power crawled toward her fingertips without permission, the not-light aching under her skin. She clamped down on it and reached for the handle.

โ€œFRIDAY,โ€ Stark said, sliding back into the driverโ€™s seat, voice going crisp, โ€œwe have friends in the area who donโ€™t like to RSVP. Light up anyone who lights us up.โ€

โ€œAlready looking,โ€ a womanโ€™s voice replied from nowhere and everywhere. Calm. British. AIs in the movies always sounded smarter than people. โ€œGood evening, Mr. Stark. Good evening, Missโ€ฆ Brooke.โ€

The passenger seat was leather and warmth and didnโ€™t squeak when she hauled herself in with more haste than grace. She gripped the door as Stark punched the accelerator, and the Audiโ€™s complaint became a purr, a thing made to outrun problems and paper over heartbeats.

โ€œJust so weโ€™re clear,โ€ Stark said, one hand on the wheel, one checking a holographic readout that just appeared out of thin airโ€”fine, not thin air, projectorsโ€”and really? the future out here was already weird, โ€œI donโ€™t usually almost murder my meet-cutes. But todayโ€™s been special. There were board members. Pepper fed me kale. We all suffered.โ€

Brookeโ€™s mouth found a shape that mightโ€™ve been a smile if it had more practice. โ€œIs this where you tell me to breathe into a bag?โ€

โ€œNah. The bag would ask for hazard pay. FRIDAY, how far are we from the tower?โ€

โ€œEight minutes at legal speeds,โ€ FRIDAY said.

โ€œWeโ€™ll do it in four.โ€ He glanced at Brooke. โ€œThat cool?โ€

She realized her fingers hadnโ€™t let go of the door. She pried them off, one by one. โ€œIf we hit a pothole, I reserve the right to scream.โ€

โ€œGreat, great. Screaming pairs well with jazz. Speaking ofโ€”โ€ He tapped the console. The trumpet got cocky. โ€œMedical on standby?โ€

โ€œDr. Choโ€™s on call,โ€ FRIDAY said. โ€œMed-bay prepped. Also, youโ€™re about to run a red light.โ€

โ€œI prefer to think of it as a strongly-worded suggestion,โ€ he said, and did it anyway.

Brooke stared at the city rushing by like it was trying to prove something. Sheโ€™d grown up in places with a single gas station, a diner, a church, and a secret they pretended not to have. New York didnโ€™t pretend. It roared. It glittered. It offered anonymity if you could pay in velocity.

โ€œBrooke,โ€ Stark said, conversational the way a needle is conversational before it bites, โ€œanyone I should be aware of who might show up at my door later and try to make my life exciting? HYDRA? AIM? Irritated librarians?โ€

โ€œThe first one,โ€ she said. โ€œAnd Iโ€™m sorry about that, I justโ€”there wasnโ€™t time. I tookโ€”โ€ She touched the inside pocket of the hoodie. The thumb drive there was a stupid weight. โ€œThey have something. They called it Satanic Minds like it was a joke. It wasnโ€™t. Itโ€” itโ€™s about me. People like me.โ€

โ€œPeople like you,โ€ Stark echoed, and didnโ€™t flinch at the word. Good. Good sign. โ€œCapabilities?โ€

She weighed lying and found it heavy. โ€œI make thingsโ€ฆ stop noticing me,โ€ she said, which wasnโ€™t even half true but was the half she could say out loud without the not-light reaching for a shape. โ€œAnd I make other things stop functioning.โ€

โ€œAnd you didnโ€™t do either to my car.โ€ He cocked an eyebrow. โ€œFlattered.โ€

โ€œIt looked expensive,โ€ she said, then added, because her mother had raised her to be honest even when HYDRA had tried to sand that off, โ€œand I didnโ€™t want to owe you.โ€

Stark barked a laugh. โ€œThatโ€™s the healthiest thing anyoneโ€™s said to me all week.โ€

The Tower rose ahead, a sleek slice of defiance against the sky. When they dipped under the portico, the rain tired of being dramatic and turned to mist. The car powered down with a contented sigh. Stark was out his door and around to hers before she could decide if she was climbing or falling. He shrugged out of his jacket and, without making a thing of it, draped it over her shoulders like she was already on the schedule.

It smelled like money and hot circuits and something sharp she couldnโ€™t name. She startled at the softness of it, at the fact that her body had started to shake the minute they were under a roof.

โ€œHey.โ€ Starkโ€™s voice dropped into that gentle register people used on skittish animals and kids. โ€œWeโ€™re inside. You did the hard part. The rest is paperwork and me being nosy.โ€

She wanted to say donโ€™t be nice to me. She wanted to say Iโ€™m dangerous even when I donโ€™t want to be. Instead, she said, โ€œDo you always invite strangers home, or am I, like, a special coupon?โ€

โ€œA terrible habit, according to my therapist.โ€ He ushered her toward the private elevator with a hand hovering near her back without touching. Respecting the bubble. Another good sign. โ€œFRIDAY, lock us down and ping security. If HYDRA had eyes on the yard, theyโ€™ll be texting in all caps.โ€

โ€œAlready done,โ€ FRIDAY said. โ€œThe building is in discreet lockdown. Ms. Potts is also requesting to know why youโ€™re tracking rain into her lobby.โ€

โ€œTell her Iโ€™m doing an art piece titled โ€˜Humbled Billionaire, 2025.โ€™ Itโ€™s mixed media.โ€

The elevator doors kissed shut. Brookeโ€™s reflection blinked back at her in gold-tinted steel: hair hacked to shoulder length with a lab scissors, hoodie two sizes too big, Starkโ€™s jacket making her look like a kid dressed up in a life she hadnโ€™t earned yet. She curled her hand into the cuff. Her knuckles hurt. Her everything hurt.

โ€œQuestion,โ€ Stark said, as the elevator whispered them upward. โ€œIf I say the words โ€˜Hโ€”โ€™โ€

โ€œDonโ€™t.โ€ The word ripped out of her, sharper than she meant, because that word could puncture walls, because trigger phrases were tripwires laid in her head like buried glass.

He held up both hands. โ€œGot it. No alphabet soup. Your brain, your pace. New deal: you talk, we listen; you stop talking, we still listen. Sound fair?โ€

Her throat ached. โ€œYouโ€™re unnervingly good at this.โ€

โ€œI have a teenager and a board of directors,โ€ he said dryly. โ€œOne of those is scarier than the other. You can guess.โ€

โ€œIs it the board?โ€

He widened his eyes, mock scandalized. โ€œHow dare.โ€

Doors opened. The med-bay smelled clean in a way that didnโ€™t promise pain. Warm light. Actual plants instead of plastic ones. Dr. Cho glanced up from a tablet and waved them in, efficient kindness in a lab coat. โ€œVitals first. Mr. Stark, move out of the way or you can explain to Ms. Potts why this patient tripped over your ego.โ€

Stark obliged, ghosting back but not leaving. The monitors fluttered to life when Cho taped a sensor to Brookeโ€™s finger. Heart rate: drum solo. Blood pressure: anxious rรฉsumรฉ. Bruises bloomed on the screen in clean lines and Latin.

โ€œNothing immediate,โ€ Cho murmured, eyes moving the way Starkโ€™s had earlier: thorough. โ€œDehydration. Adrenaline crash. Minimal contusions. Theโ€ฆ device on your wristโ€”may I?โ€

Brooke looked down at the hospital tape. Under it was the cuff HYDRA had clasped on after the last test run. Her skin crawled at the thought of their tech inside her body, their code riding her nerves. โ€œCut it off.โ€

โ€œWeโ€™ll be gentle,โ€ Cho promised, and meant it.

The first snip made Brookeโ€™s palms sweat. The second made her jaw ache. When Cho peeled the last strip free and eased the metal cage away, Brooke didnโ€™t realize she was crying until the air on her skin felt cold and wrong and then right. Stark had his jacket back around her without comment.

โ€œThere,โ€ Cho said, dropping the cuff into a tray that swallowed sound. โ€œDignity returned.โ€

Brooke sat very still because if she moved she might fling herself at something and break either it or herself. The not-light uncurled in her palm, restless, wanting. She hid it by curling her fingers in the jacket lapel like she was holding a rope.

โ€œOkay,โ€ Stark said lightly, which people did when things were heavy. โ€œSo. You have a drive that says Horrible Name Program on it. You have a skillset that makes my AI raise an eyebrow, and she doesnโ€™t have eyebrows. You have the kind of posture that says youโ€™ve been waiting for the floor to drop out for a long time. Counter-offer: we keep you from falling through it.โ€

She blinked at him. โ€œWhy?โ€

โ€œBecause thisโ€”โ€ He gestured, taking in the cuff, the hoodie, the tremor in her hands that she couldnโ€™t deny now that it wasnโ€™t about running; taking in the whole night. โ€œโ€”is exactly the kind of thing weโ€™re supposed to be doing with all these toys. Saving people. Making the bad guys hate the audit. And, selfishly, because I want to know what Satanic Minds is and whether we can unfry it.โ€

Her laugh surprised them both. It sounded like a rusted hinge that still worked. โ€œYouโ€™re very sure of yourself.โ€

โ€œOnly in front of an audience.โ€ He rocked back on his heels. โ€œSleep a little. Eat something that isnโ€™t nutrient paste. Then, if youโ€™re game, weโ€™ll open Pandoraโ€™s flash drive togetherโ€”supervised, in a sandbox, with three lawyers and a priest. Kidding. Two lawyers.โ€

โ€œAnd if Iโ€™m not game?โ€ The question came out before she could stop it. Testing. Always testing.

Stark shrugged. โ€œThen we try again tomorrow. Or we donโ€™t. Your call. But for what itโ€™s worth?โ€ His eyes softened in a way that felt undeserved, which probably meant it was exactly the right amount. โ€œYou did the brave thing already. Everything after this is administrative.โ€

Her shoulders lowered, inch by reluctant inch. She hadnโ€™t meant to do brave things tonight. Sheโ€™d meant to not die. But sometimes not-dying was the bravest thing you could do.

โ€œOkay,โ€ she said, finally, quietly. โ€œOkay.โ€

โ€œFRIDAY,โ€ Stark said, bright again, โ€œnote in the file: Brooke is okay.โ€ Then, to Brooke, โ€œAlso, you should know my team is going to argue about who gets to help. Theyโ€™re weird like that. Donโ€™t let the enthusiasm scare you.โ€

โ€œYour team,โ€ Brooke said, the words tasting strange and generous. โ€œYou mean the Avengers.โ€

โ€œFewer capital letters when you say it out loud,โ€ Stark advised. โ€œThey get big heads.โ€

Brooke let herself lean back into the med-bay pillow, eyes slipping shut for the first time in what felt like days. The world narrowed to warmth and the soft not-silence of people who stayed. Somewhere distant, a city kept moving without her. Somewhere closer, a lab door clicked, and the sound didnโ€™t belong to HYDRA anymore.

Before the dark took herโ€”not the dangerous dark, the good kind, the one you chooseโ€”she kept the drive under her palm and made herself a promise: sheโ€™d open it on her terms. Sheโ€™d let the world see what theyโ€™d tried to make of her and be more anyway.

She slept. Stark took the chair by the door like heโ€™d always planned to.

Outside, rain washed the street clean without asking permission.

A/N: Tonyโ€™s insurance just filed for emotional support tires.

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