Cursed Angel of Light and Shadow

"I loved the book. I think with 12 suitors though, it was a bit much. You could have cut it down to half and it would have been better. Not one of them showed leadership qualities though. If they are vying for her hand, why didn't one ask her on a single date? Or ask how they could help other than plants? You showed them as more lazy adults into gaming, movies, laying around while she worked with her dad. How did they get their money? They had to have income from something....... That's why I thought if you cut down on how many guys you could have gone into more depth with their characters. I'm not sure how you figured you could add Yuma as a possible suitor, and not even talk about his background. You have him in a love story in Thorns of Midnight with a happy ending. She's not even mentioned in this book, nor his children...if your going to use the same characters in your books you need to bring their backgrounds with them. Did she die? What made him a viable suitor now? Its evident it happened before this book as they are still in Japan and who is currently King. Things to think about. Hopefully you will write a 2nd book to this one and bring his background into it. Being he already has a love story I hope Carla becomes the fiancé. That's who I'm rooting for. Just my opinion 😉"