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Luna

"This chapter had me hooked the fall scene was terrifying, and the reveal about Fire’s bond with Amethyst added so much emotional weight. The mix of fear, relief, and betrayal came through really strongly. Is Fire’s anger more about Amethyst hiding the truth, or about everyone else knowing while she didn’t?"

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