Inkitt
Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Love it

"Can't wait for the next story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Order of the Firstborn

"One of the best stories I have read in a very long time. Solid story-telling, well developed caracters and rich descriprions throughout - the kind that makes it feel like you are watching a movie in your head. Considering the amount of caracters, events and complications it is impressive that the author managed to keep it all untangled, never leaving the reader confused even for a second. Most impressive. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
From one riddle to the next!

"I am so happy it is the weekend and the updates to this story are rolling in. I am living for these characters as well as the romance sparking. Keep going! This is brilliant🫶"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Story is very interesting .

"I’m looking forward for the next chapter. Some of the wording within is a bit mixed up and needs a bit of tweaking to increase the flow for the audience "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I’m obsessed!

"You’re so talented! I’m holding my breath for the second term! "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation