What is your opinion?
Fresh Concept, Strong Beginning
"Even with only one chapter, this story already feels refreshingly different. I love the idea of making the main character a horror movie critic who suddenly finds herself starring in her own horror story. It’s both original and intriguing, and it immediately sets the tone for something unique. Since there’s just one chapter so far, there isn’t too much to say yet about the characters or worldbuilding, but I’m definitely curious to see how both will develop as the story continues. The only piece of advice I have is about the layout. I miss seeing separate paragraphs, as they really help the reader follow the narrative more smoothly. Other than that, this is a strong and promising first chapter, great work!"
I love the plot🥹
"I liked how you wrote i am gonna make her mine line ❤️"
