Inkitt
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Good story!

"I really liked the story and the main characters, the side characters didn't appear much and weren't deep. Over all the writing style was very good even if the author used quite some boring phrases that are used in all romance stories, like "and for the first time in a long time" or "and maybe for now it's enough"... Everytime I read these same phrases in nearly every story I think "oh no, not again". And my last critic is that when he withdrew again, it was nearly copied word for word and that felt like dragging."

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