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Bitter Sweet!

"Hi Marley, This was a very sweet sexy story. I was a little put off by John's state of sorrow and confusion made very clear in the last chapter. I do love that "Alexia" was so kind to him and they had a blissful union however brief. I wish you would write another chapter or three about Alexia's new found joy and what adventures she has. She should swim naked in the ocean everyday. I can imagine she has an elderly aunt that lives aways down the coast in a small town. She goes for the rest of the summer meeting a a guy and his sister that have a small cafe. The sexual tension between the three is instant. All the brother wears is a pair of running shorts and flip flops. His large cock and balls slip out from time to time as he mans the grill. The sister waiting tables is always barefoot wearing a wife beater that leaves her nipples tented. She is exposed from the waist down when she walks with her arousal obvious when the sunlight catches the wetness between her legs. The cafe draws a mix of young families, teens and college kids. Wandering hands and comments create an erotic vibe but it's not over the top. Alexia fits right in with her barely there bikini which quickly becomes too restricting between wondering hands and waiting tables. Alexia is at first shocked then delighted as she quickly discovers the brother and sister are lovers as well as a male cousin with the brother. The rest of the summer unfolds with wild days in the cafe and nights spent with her new lovers and others at the beach or other popular hang outs. Alexia's aunt seeing how happy she is suggests she stay on with her in exchange for her home someday. Take Care, Kevin "

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