Tiny specks

"Dude , you’re great . You’re plot is somewhat of a cliché but rather in a good way your technical skills are not bad either but to be honest I would like it more in fact love it if it had less adjectives and extra sentences that could be somehow abbreviated or written in short form and skip some of the drama . In the end it’s your book and this is my opinion so if u think differently or from a different perspective u may carry on ."