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Training

"This is a story of training . Not only hockey, but the training of what a woman wanted her man to be. At times it was hard to read the chapters… it felt cruel. He learned to treat her as she wanted to be treated. "

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Fake to real

"What great story. The only thing that truly annoyed me was the double up on a chapter before carrying on with the story. There was realty no need for it. I found it frustrating to be honest. Apart from that I really enjoyed your book. Thankyou for sharing."

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Amazing !

"Very well written story!! "

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Fake to Real

"I loved this story. It was real life in multi-cultural Canada. The charcters faced their own life challenges, where ethnicity, culture, tradition ...and legacy played important roles. It was informative.. learning something new about technology, sports, people. I really enjoyed the style of writing, going back and forth, experiencing the thoughts, emotions, inner voices of both, Alex and Eve. I did find some parts confusing. I would go back in the story to check if I had not read this before since they were so much similar. It happened many times during the second half of book. Also, who was Kyler's girlfriend..Hannah or Megan? Thank you 4.8"

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