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D.T.M.

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Summary

In this wonderful planet has so many beautiful boys and girls but they didn't know they can fly or cross two place maybe moon and mars. You can see in this novel that they control him or herself even more a neighbor or thief or robber.

Status
6mo ago
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

My name is Brickson Daniel aged Fifteen years old but my birth certificate shown as Sixteen. I ever told my mom whose name is Janifer Rocken what are real my age and she said she definitely make birth me on aged fifteen but can’t said the years of birth certificate.

Anyway I will always introduce my age as fifteen.

My home has two people absolutely my mom and me. As character of father of me had never commented in my house probably my mom was Ave Maria.

If my mom was never existed in earth this house absolutely didn’t exist too. There for my mom is my house wow! Oh god only celebrate us by buy this house when she had good job for the divorce lawyer who are seventy result of win a diction of court. So my mom is victory and lucky sister and so on. I can tell you with earnest heart that my mom has sex partner as I know her boss probably his no her name is Dora Dorna who are so beautiful I ever seen in this planet. Probably they went my home whenever they are willing to sex and first they eat chicken and beers and always my mom said as “Oh my good boy should you fall to the lucky dream?” and closed my room’s small door soon after a certain half an hour I can heard their scream all the night. I remember the advertisement of battery man who were worked all of year with never stop and that’s them my mother and his no her good partner.

Whenever the boss and my mom are going to attend the work office that is located near my home but I never heard what they work for or the amount of salary of my mom but she always can bought any clothes or material she want to buy the boss give me one dollar for uncertain reason but I maybe assume that the fee of patience of their scream in all the night.

Anyway I think my nick name is ‘One Dollar All’. Bad mom or good mom I can’t define the base of my mom to me till the day! It’s so difficult to describe that day.

In this introduce can’t I say or can? Hold on please if you want see the final chapter in this novel for fiction or nonfiction.

My mother has so kind mind except the food choice for me. She always said the burger is devil. And she made a nick name every burger brand for example the burger king who’s name of ‘king’ is bad king cause every kings was bad absolute monarch and Donald of McDonald is bad president of Trump. And the brand of burger was absolutely bad devil. I breed one of hamster whose name is Jack in my house. I have also secret the deep version you can’t imagine. I breed my hamster took him a tablet of feed that can be inscribe a word of one alphabet on each tablet.

I worked with my hamsters on deep version of secret. And I out of my room to living room and after one minute later my mom said as “Will you eat the set of burger of McDonald as our dinner tonight?” but I reject that and said.

“I want to eat the burger produced by Burger King”

“Sure you can eat the kings!”

I swallowed my salvia. It’s wonderful day.

That’s my deep secret probably every one can imagine or not?

My mom waked to the office with her boss who are absolutely drunk last night cause the sound of vomit that’s are more loud than her scream in the bed. And I walked alone to the school so near from my house probably five minute?

In our middle school has three section for student and in every of section has 10 students each one teacher. My form teacher is Madonna. You never saw the perfect physical version of woman as hers. Especially she wore the one-piece of sleeveless. But everyone can see her hair of armpit. That’s a gorgeous and gorgeous that are insufficient for me every day I dream of scene the sucking her armpit as greed full up.

“Stand up Brickson!” Madona suddenly cried.

“Yeah” my ankle was shudder for her crying but only the attention on me.

“Will you explain me the author of Camus’ main thought in his novel of ‘The stranger’?”

“Yes but I think that he was stranger himself when he write the novel?”

“Oh, absolutely perfect”

Luckily I escape her homework in one hundred script of phrase of Camus’ novel of some pages.

My friendly school mate was one person who’s name is Denbra Mallin. He is so handsome guy but is very reluctant in matter of any girls even more than me. He seems like weary on today his face may be bulldog who eat any sadness.

“What’s up man?”

“Secretly tell only you I was ejaculated last night”

“What an incredible man”

He said that he dreamt of meeting of girls and that girl suddenly grow up middle aged woman and sucked his penis all of night. I finally know that his weary look. And he was keeping slept in first class. At a two of times class he has a certain mind again in that’s Miss. Aemily’s mathematics. She was so sexy girl probably you can’t imagine that. She wore the shorts pants and T-shirts I also like that fashion. I like to see her when she eat lunch with sandwich and milks. Whenever she eat them she mumble some word and let her lips purse and open like hamsters. Maybe she wore the black stockings during the all of weekdays because in Thursday her stocking left foot has a hole in one centimeter and in Friday that is two centimeter and in right side of foot has a hole in one centimeter. I look back the seat of Denbra and he was scribbling something on his note and suddenly Miss. Aemily was shuddering on the hole of her down body seem like to piss? And her face so blur seem like to burn all of class room to hell. Finally she grasp her main under point and run to the out of class. Every one startled and some students laugh. After a ten minutes later she come back with blur of face remained. I can saw Denbra didn’t scribble any more. I will ask to Denbra what was he scribbled when she was wandering seem like to piss. But I disremember the will after our lunch time.

After over the school class me and Denbra were going to Denbra’s house. We like to run in each pace keep going. Denbra’s house located five miles from school. We ran to the house. Denbra’s pace are so slow maybe he loose in running games with turtle! Also me of pace wasn’t fast in normal but I can win with turtle!

After first arriving me of Denbra’s house I like to wait him on the small bench. In secret two version of me was the talent that I can see the scene through upper sky but that’s possible in only sunny day seem like today and I can see Denbra was running in one miles before. How that slow man but I envy his today’s dream with middle woman. I like always middle woman who seem like to has a absolutely talent for can’t but love them. Finally Denbra has arrived on near me and we opened the door and walked to the door that are so black that nobody and non of material shown.

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7 months
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Wow, that cliffhanger at the end of the last chapter was intense! I have a few theories and some light feedback on the character dynamics—are you looking for constructive critiques at this stage, or should I just keep my 'cheerleader' hat on? Loving the vibe of this story!

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