Inkitt
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Inkitt Keeps Deleting my Posts

"I'm a very boring 30-year-old - probably not the target demographic for this story - but I got so attached to these kids thanks to the author's talent at building PEOPLE. They aren't afraid to give their characters flaws, have them fuck up, and dig them into deeper and deeper holes. Marcos had my blood pressure rising with the stuff he did but that only made me more invested in him. I wanted to grab him and shake him but it was out of worry xD The contrast made his antics fun to read. I only wish I could find out what happened in the sequels. A non-romance book is going to have a rough time on Inkitt (although I appreciate the change of pace) but if you ever publish the sequels on another platform, hit me up! PS. I would kill and die for Ivan I want to adopt him "

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4Riders Conquest

"So far this a good story and penalty look at the challenges of young men & women on the edge of adulthood and in a blue collar environment with doubts dreams & fears of the future.About two sides of the tracks exploring each culture.About friends thru thick & thin.About each one's inner thoughts and personal issues but told in a first person perspective.Its not a dull read by any means and I find myself caught up in the storyline to see what's next. Definitely worth the time read.I think you will like it .With that said I'm waiting on the next chapters . Thanks for sharing "

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