Can't remember the title

"It reads very staccato. I imagine this is what it would be like to read a fever dream. It's a sweet story, but it has the potential to be something really fantastic. Great concept but too abbreciated and not enough depth. I wish there was a better build-up of their connection instead of the constant implication that something is very wrong, only for it to turn out well without the substance to make the ending feel special and meaningful."