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Un viejo verde

"Me encantó el libro, a mí parecer le faltan capítulos pero mientras estuvo excelente, el libro se los recomendaría a mis amigas que son igual de calientes que yo 🤗"

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forbidden but so loving

"A hot AH story with 2 sexy related man having a lot of sex and falling in love. I love the awkwardness of the beginning. I love the gusto in experimenting. I love how both opened up in this unconventional relationship. The explicitness is fabulous. 👏🏻👏🏻👏🏻"

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Father and Son

"This was an amazing story about a Father “Oleg” and his Son “Pavel”. It was a very powerful story about a Sons dislike towards his Father and then going to find his Father up in Alaska where he found a different Father figure than he knew. It turned into a lovely love story between a Father and Son. Although people would call it incest it was truly a story needing to be told. Although the story has come to an end it would be nice to have a follow-up story about the lives of Oleg and Pavel in the future. Maybe of them finding the loves of their lives, getting to get her again or even Pavel visiting his father again in Alaska. So much more could be told. Congratulations to the writer. Great story writing. ⭐️😉🫶🏼💕🥰⭐️"

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Dirty old man

"Thankyou for completing this book.. I have loved it and you way of detail gives a clear imagination to reality.. kudos once again.."

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Dirty old man

"Aw what is next "

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In love

"I LOVE IT. ITS MOT IVER YET BUT I READ KT ALL IN LESS THAN HALF A DAY! CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS "

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Loved it

"I enjoyed this book. You have a vivid imagination that I rather dig and I look forward to reading more of your publications. "

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Reading Experiment

"To be honest, I don’t even remember what I expected when I started reading Dirty Old Man. Some readers will see it as an erotic story aimed at a specific audience. Others will see it as a provocation, a transgression, or the peak of impropriety. I’ve always preferred reading between the lines. So many uncomfortable emotions woven into this story so skillfully that I could almost feel them on my own skin. Loneliness. Loss. Anger. The desperate need to belong to someone. At first, the relationship between Pavel and Oleg felt strange. Very strange. I kept telling myself this shouldn’t work for me at all. And yet the deeper I sank into Pavel’s thoughts and emotions, the harder it became to look away. I don’t know if I accepted what was happening. I’m not even sure that was the point. What I know is that after a while I stopped looking at the situation itself and started looking at what these two people were doing to each other emotionally. And once that happened, it became surprisingly easy to understand them. This book made me uncomfortable more than once. But it also made me think, and those are usually the stories that stay with me the longest. I’ll definitely read Part Two because I’m honestly curious what kind of future the author can find for them once they leave the Alaskan wilderness behind and return to the real world."

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This isn't a typical DILF

"This dad love story is so hot and steamy. It’s centered on the story of Paul/Pavelik learning to rebuild his relationship with his nearly estranged father. It is spicy despite being set in a cold, Alaskan winter. I loved the character development and its humorous parts."

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Love story

"I love this story so far! The tension, the discovery of their sexuality, is so hot! I love how it is described."

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I love you

"Your stories are amazing. Guess you have a vivid wild incestgination."

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Nicely done.

"Beautifully written. There’s an actual plot and the build up is just right.."

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Dirty old man

"I love the plot. Your writing skills are phenomenal! "

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New reed

"I like how the story flows really naturally. Thers no rushing or too slow of a pace its just right. The main characters feel real as well. No cringe moments and very little second hand embarrassment."

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Dirty old Man

"Really liked the book and glad the bond between the duo was able to strengthen on top of exploring their taboo relationship..... I would also like to know who was watching the brother,the best friend,a neighbor,or the ex wife ?? I would also read a sequel if you decide to continue with their stories .i would recommend it to anyone to read. I enjoyed it very much "

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Genuine but Disturbingly Romantic and Erotic Relationship like no other

"I liked how the author of this story explored the emotional turmoil that both father and son experience after Pavel's revelation of having romantic feelings for his own biological father, Oleg. It was sickeningly sweet and erotic at the same how both Oleg and Pavel view this sexual interaction between them as wrong, both on a societal and moral basis, but still cannot help themselves but sink deeper into their lust for one another. Congratulations to the author for making such a wonderfully erotic but wrong story about an emotionally conflicted and exhausted son with his caring, loving but blunt father. I am excited how their story will go from now, will this develop into something more? Will they one day tell the other son in this story, Andrei, about this set-up? And how will he react to this relationship happening between his brother and father?"

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Oh yes!!!

"That last phrase: "Open your mouth wide for daddy" OMG 🤯 instant combustion. "

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