Inkitt
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"Great story. Wish it was longer."

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Ruthless king

"No dislike so far. I think it keeps readers interested. Good plot and I think writer has good creativity in writing "

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Fun, entertaining read

"Fun, entertaining read"

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Very good story

"Very well written Very enjoyable Couldn’t fault it Well done"

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Ruthless king

"This story kept me glued to the end could not put it down"

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Ruthless King

"What an awesome story, captivating and so glad so she is just as badass as he is. Nice change. Thank you"

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Not your typical mafia book

"Love the characters and all of the twists and turns that you don’t see coming! This is a deep story with darkness that doesn’t apologize for it. "

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Good characters and plot

"The plot changed and gets better I like this story "

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Amazing story.

"I really enjoyed this story. It shouldn't end like this. I want more of them."

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Totally love dark romance waiting for more to come

"The book is amazing , maybe a bit more fire would’ve added to the story but otherwise this was splendid "

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Ruthless King

"It was entertaining. I did enjoy it. But there was a major lack of punctuation. I’m kinda a grammar nerd and usually I just brush it off, but this was a noticeable amount. For those who love—I’m just gonna call it what it is—smut, then this isn’t the story for you. There are two sex scenes and are not very descriptive. But there are a lot of scenes with sexual tension, as the dialogue in those scenes...💯. On point. All in all, pretty decent read. "

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Intriguing

"I'm really enjoying this book so far - hope it doesn't end too soon."

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Wish there were more chapters

"Loved every part of it and was so hooked o read it in one go. However, I wish there was more. Felt like a short story "

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Good story

"Just needed longer chapters, more indepth. But loved the story line"

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It’s good but...

"It good however, not very detailed and too fast that u don’t feel character development or plot development . It stark. And abrupt. "

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Suspense

". A suspenseful plot but two dimensional characters and syntax is off with many sentences. Great potential with a little more polishing and character work. Thank you for sharing "

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