Reading through

"This story has a lot of potential hieverr it's nit totally clear what story is being told here or where the focus is. The point of view of the story shifts a bit which makes it a little confusing to stay on track. Sylvia and Scott are a good couple but I wish we could see more of their interaction and more of their chemistry. The story of the brother and his wife feels a little distracting. I'll continue to follow!"