First Love Trope

"This has been such an enjoyable read so far! The school setting feels fresh and authentic, and the way you’ve described the characters makes the story engaging and easy to follow. I also love how you’ve captured the cultural backdrop—it gives the narrative a unique flavor and makes it stand out from other school stories. If I may add a small suggestion: the relationship between the two leads moves very quickly, from meeting at a competition to confessing deep feelings in their next encounter. It would make their journey even more powerful if their love unfolded a little more gradually, with time for the tension and emotions to build. That way, readers could savor the connection alongside the characters. Overall, it’s a great start, and I’m excited to see how the story develops further! 🌸 "