Inkitt
Back to Story

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Captivante

"Bonjour Merci d'avoir écrit une histoire comme celle-là. C'est une vraie pépite. J'ai adoré. Vous avez une magnifique plume. Je vais aller lire vos autres livres. Je vous conseille de lire cette histoire. "

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Gripping read

"Really enjoyed this story. Had great characters, interesting storyline and it had me on the edge of my seat. Few sections where a paragraph had been duplicated or the story had been expanded /rewritten but the original paragraphs were still there but doesn’t occur frequently enough to make it too annoying or disruptive to the reading experience. Look forward to reading your other stories "

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Loved it!

"Is there a book 2. I don't see one anywhere. Eeeeek!"

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Super excited!

"Can’t wait for more!"

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Great Story!

"Definitely looking forward to what happens next. Plot surprises abound. The Alpha personalities are as expected for the genre. Fighting for change to the outdated class systems is a hill worth winning on... would definitely reread and recommend to anyone who enjoys the genre. Well done!"

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The alpha who broke me

"Love the story so far I’m really excited to read what happens next! Very well written!!"

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The Alfa who Broke Me

"Great story I can’t wait to find out what the secret her mother is talking about is, and what Lewis is after."

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The alpha who broke me

"Love the overall story different from the usual ones I’ve read good characters can’t wait to get to the end "

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The Alpha Who Broke Me

"Really enjoying this story 😊 I feel for her how sad and hurt she is … thank you author 👏 look forward to more "

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Is there another installment to this or is it just done?

"Frustrating that for weeks there has been no addition or update, could the author let us know if they’re done and this is a lost cause? "

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