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Great characters

"Perfect slow build up to the storyline. Classy descriptives to enthrall scenes. Keeps you wanting more.."

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From cold to . . .

"It started off so cold but the ending was full of warmth. Loved it! "

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Great read!

"I love a shy mouse and a sexy bachelor kind of story. This is how you change a man, because he wants to. I admired Hailey's boldness, when she needed to put her foot down. It's a positive attribute to not be a pushover. Even though it falters with Gwen, which is typical from a mean girl. Great job, love the characters, spicy scenes, and the connection. "

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My heart 😩

"This story is crafted so beautifully, it is almost lyrical. My heart fluttered with every chapter."

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Nice

"A nice read. I enjoyed time with it."

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Sooooooo good!!❤️‍🔥🔥!

"This one is a slow burn with twists and turns that you don’t see coming. The suspense is palpable, and the character’s developments throughout the story are heartbreaking and fulfilling. This author is one of my faves and “Breathless” is definitely one of her best yet! I can’t recommend this story enough!👏🏻😍🔥😮‍💨"

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Sebastian and Hailey

"Separation degrees between permission, control, love, want and needs will always lead to wanting more once you have had a taste of it."

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Loved it..

"Reading about Sebatian & Hailey abd their ups and downs got the emotions working. Drama, laughter, a little heartbreak and more. A real slow burn that got the ideas working what would happen in the next chapter. Loved it..🥰"

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Breathless

"I liked all of it. Very suspenseful but deliberate. Kept me wishing for more. Kind of slow moving but that’s what made it suspenseful. Waiting for more. "

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Soooooo good.

"What a great read. You get drawn in and wrapped up in the plot from the very beginning and you don't want to put it down. Watching their story unfold is absolutely beautiful. Would definitely recommend. "

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Good novel

"Nothing to add"

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