Inkitt
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A long haul to HEA

"This is an engaging story about a bully and the quiet girl. The author did a good job with history and all kinds of ups and downs on their journey to happiness."

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Loved

"I loved the story! There were a few minor discrepancies that made me a little confused (going from a one month trial run for BF/GF{this turned into the one week game play that shifted the whole plot}; Julien & Mila turning into Julien & Lili) but it didn’t take away from the overall story and experience. Overall, I loved your writing, as always. "

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Lynne

"This is a fab story very enjoyable heart bound and lovely.luved reading this book.well done .."

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Love on Deadline

"A really sweet story. "

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Heartwarming

"Thank you for writing these creative, romantic tail and sharing it with us readers. I look forward to reading more of your work. "

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Great read

"Once again well written book. Love the plot and I really enjoyed reading it, look forward for more great books from you author ❤️"

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Love on deadline

"What a powerful story it really touches me,from bully to love Ilove lili how she survive her love and Jake though he love lili that much but he is hiding it sometimes until the he has no way to hide it, beautiful story.Thank you for making and writting a hearywarming story author it was great reads."

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Story should come with a warning

"The author is clearly a great writer, but this book starts off with embracing so much toxicity and verbal abuse as normal that I cannot continue. It should come with warning in the beginning to alert readers to the toxicity and verbal abuse so we know if we want to proceed. Good writing otherwise."

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