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By Chance

"Entertaining and wonderful story ! Keep writing please to please your readers . Well done 👏👏👏"

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An uneven story with potential

"Starts out strong, then the plot very abruptly veers into seemingly random directions with a lot of glaring grammatical and spelling mistakes that yank you right out of the story. It's a shame because the first third of the book is very fun and well-written with really excellent descriptions. It's almost like another, less-skilled author else took over. "

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