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Summary

Here a young person would fall in love .thought she found her perfect man but turns out to be a complete disaster

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Excerpt
Chapters
1
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Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Ahem ahem i coughed. Mom I'm going out . Mom replied ok then be careful dear. As i went outside I saw my bestie from afar holding popsicles for me i ran towards her and asked oh you got this for me she replied yeaa and who else will get it for you. Then she asked soooo what's the next step . Let's go to the nearby park i replied. She said let's go with a (geeky sound) i laughed . As we took our cycle and was peddling . I was feeling better because it was the first day of the holidays. I was peddling and the golden brown rays were upon me i took a long breath and felt quite happy i couldn't notice much as I sensed a disaster was approaching us and there it was she fell down. I stopped the cycle and ran towards her are you ok? I asked. She got up and was rebuking the boy i looked behind to saw him there it was the disaster standing before me i could remember he was holding an antic book and white headphones . We looked at each other not for long before he walked away then i turned towards her you sure your alright i asked she replied yea yea I'm ok but i think that boy was blind and deaf he couldn't see nor hear I was screaming to make a way he was standing there for me to crash him what kind of man is he with an angry voice she said. I replied ok now let's go get something to eat I'm starving she said ok . And we ordered something to eat as we sat on the geeky bench i asked her . I have not seen him around who is he . She replied with a mouth full of food and was blah bering . I said woah woah eat slowly and then tell me I will wait . She finishes and says he is in our neighborhood and goes to our school and girl he lives next door of yours. I said how come I have never seen him . She replied how will u see him ur only Loyal to that one boy .you won't even look at other boys. Hey it's not true i speak with the neard i replied. She said yea yea because u wanna ace the test so u ask him for tips not much . Umm ok so what are we waiting for let's have fun she said i said comon and ran towards the park . We laughed, we played, we shared gossips like it was never gonna end soon the clouds were getting dark . I said let's go home it's getting late she said awwwww with a sad voice. Ok then let's go home as i reached home. And opened the door mom I'm back . Darling is this the time for you to come home mom asked. Comon mom it's only 6 and i got here just on time i replied. I made some cookies go and give it to the neighbors . I said no thanks mom u give it to them . (Deep voice) are you gonna give it or not dad asked. Ok I'm gonna be right back with a nervous laugh. As I left and going towards the neighbors house with a nervous feeling as I'm going to see the disaster again . I knocked the door i thought they couldn't hear so i rang the doorbell there he was the disaster but this time i felt something like my heart was beating fast the butterflies in my body and there was a whole galaxy I'm my eyes. Umm are you ok ? He asked with a (soft voice ) . I studdered umm....ye...yes . I'm...fine.... . Inner voice what's happening i never have spoken this nervously. He looked at me and asked may i help you with anything. I replied uhhh... Mo.....mom madee.. some... Cookies for you guys... He smiled ohh is it. My inner voice ohhhhhh he is so perfect. Well then thanks he took the cookies and closed the door . I stood there for some seconds as I was gonna leave .the door opened again Hey what's your name he asked i said Flora what's yours i asked he said Lewis . We will meet around won't we ? He asked. Yes we will i replied .as i went ran towards the house i stopped and acted cool .Is everything ok sweet heart mom asked. Yea yea every thing is fine I'm gonna go upstairs to do home work. And then i ran towards my bedroom and closed the door slowly and then jumped towards the bed .facing the bed and screamed . What just happened why am I acting like this i went towards my study table and opened the laptop and was searching for his ditiles not for long the door opened there he was and saw the what i was upto are u stalking he asked he stood there silently and i said I.....Ii...i...

What will happen next will she come with a good excuse? or is she gonna say the truth stay tuned

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