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Una vida sin el sol

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Summary

Este poema explora la vulnerabilidad de la soledad y el miedo a transitar la vida sin la calidez del afecto. Entre metáforas de noches sin estrellas y cielos sin sol, el poema revela la contradicción de haberse acostumbrado al silencio, pero temer morir en él. Con un tono íntimo y melancólico, invita a reflexionar sobre la fragilidad humana, la necesidad de compañía y la imposibilidad de concebir una existencia sin luz.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

¿Cómo pensarme solo

si no puedo imaginar una noche

sin estrellas que cuenten mi insomnio,

sin un cielo celeste

al que buscarle formas entre nubes?

Si pensar que mis pasos no tendrán compañía me aterra,

imaginar la enfermedad sin abrigo

es ya una forma de agonía.

¿Cómo hago yo,

que crecí entre mis silencios,

para asumir que moriré igual?

Yo, que me acostumbré a mi soledad,

y ahora no soporto

ni el eco de mi propia voz…

¿Cómo podría describir

una vida sin el sol?

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