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Great novel

"This story has a great plot. I love all the characters and that they have their own story."

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The Alpha’s Chubby Obsession

"Great story plot! I love the twist here…almost every book I read would have one believe that every protagonist is drop dead beautiful and describe what they think “Beautiful “ is. You lay it out very nicely in your book that “Beauty is in the eye of the beholder”“Beauty” can mean different things to different people. And pointing out the differences between Bella and Aina…Bella so beautiful on the outside but lacks beauty on the inside, and Aina who is such a beautiful person in general, but thinks she is not on the outside. Great job!!! "

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The Alpha’s Chubby Obsession

"I absolutely love the story so far! Please add more chapters!!"

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Getting interesting

"Aira is exactly the spitfire mom she needs to be. Between her, the Luna and Aina this is some great strong female characters I’ve been waiting for. "

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Finally, a Mc that isnt slender or petite!

"I loved reading this. As a plus sized woman myself, this made me feel so good to read. You have a good read on how a bigger girl would feel in a situation like this. The only feedback I have for this story is that sometimes it's difficult to know whether someone is mind-linking or when she's talking to her wolf, but I got used to it pretty quickly. Please keep writing stories like these! Im going to read all of your other works now! "

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Good Read

"It's been a while since I found a book where I couldn't predict the outcomes. There is multiple twists and turns, I did lose the storyline a few times during a few chapters. There was a few times I was confused by the names as the MFC and her mother had similar names so I got a little lost and think one chapter was labelled wrong. But I liked the story and enjoyed reading it."

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