Inkitt
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Art in its purest form.

"Despite the obvious lack of gaming knowledge of the author, they actually managed to get me in the story. I mean, even sentences like "Sure, let's kill all the level 3 monsters" (have you even played one gam in your life ?) did not take me out of it. The author trully understand Nathalie and Lottie, as a yellowjackets enjoyer myself, I can see it. Thank you for this, i'll wait for the following chapters."

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