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A darkly, intriguing read

"I've really enjoyed what I've read of this story so far. The main character really has me hooked. I hate her already, and that's a compliment to the writer. I really enjoy an unlikeable main character story when it's done well, and here it is. She's sharp, she's detached and she's ruthless. Her voice is unique and her personality really shines through. Her motivations are twisted by ambition and perhaps something darker... I'm looking forward to finding out what that it. The supporting characters are also brilliantly portrayed, each with their own drive and motivation. We've got some tasty conflicts brewing and I can't wait to see how this all plays out. The imagery is vivid, the writer's style really makes the scene pop in the mind. The descriptions are colourful with out going over the top. I would highly recommend this story, I'm certainly going to carry on reading. "

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Love It!

"Addictive from start to finish! The characters, the worldbuilding, the action, etc."

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