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Torn

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Summary

POWER WARS series ~ Someone is lying. Someone is being framed. And someone knows exactly how far the truth can be bent before it breaks. Secrets, greed and betrayal turn love and loyalty into weapons as carefully constructed lives begin to fracture. The closer the truth gets, the more dangerous it becomes to know who engineered the fall. Because sometimes the person who looks guilty was simply positioned there.

Status
Complete
Chapters
11
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

The Spin Before Silence

The first shriek wasn’t metal. It was the sound that darkness made when something tore through it.

Liam’s hands locked on the wheel. Headlights smeared into white rain as the sedan fishtailed, tires screaming across slick asphalt. The guardrail flashed, vanished, reappeared. The car jerked left as if some invisible hand had flicked it.

“Hold on,” he muttered, breath thin.

Across from him, Christine didn’t hold on.

Her seatbelt was clipped, hair smooth, posture perfect. She turned her head and studied him. Calm. Too calm. Her eyes followed him the way a cat watches glass tip off a counter: not alarmed—curious. A corner of her mouth tilted upward as the car swung harder.

The first spin grabbed them by the spine and flung. Lights blurred into a carousel. The horizon vanished. Liam pumped the brakes—caught, slipped, caught again. A pop. A tire giving out.

“Christine!” His voice drowned under the scream of rubber.

He’d picked her up because she said her ride had left her stranded. It was late, the rain relentless. He wasn’t the kind of man to leave anyone waiting at a curb. Weeks of small conversations—coffee cart, lobby, long day’s end—had painted her as thoughtful, offbeat, maybe kind. She’d asked about his mother with soft blinking pauses. She’d gone quiet when he’d said dinner between them was unwise.

Now the car spun again, the rail rushing head-on. He wrenched the wheel.

Across from him, Christine’s gaze never wavered.

It didn’t look like fear. It looked like interest.

The second spin came harder. The seatbelt bit his chest. Coins leapt from the console, chimed, fell. A semi’s horn blared through the storm, spray swallowing them whole.

And then—her mouth. That tilt deepening. A low, breathy sound slipped free.

Not panic. Not pain. A laugh, small and delighted, like she’d waited for the punchline.

‘Is she smiling?’ Panic crowded the thought before he could answer.

The car bucked, slammed, flipped. His shoulder cracked the window. The airbag detonated. Sound went cotton-soft. He spat pink into the stale, chemical air. Sirens swelled in the distance.

Hands on metal. Crowbars biting. “Stay still. We’re getting you out!”

“Driver’s side compromised.”

Driver’s side? Not that they’re stuck?

He blinked, disoriented. She wasn’t trapped.

Christine was outside already—damp hair, blanket wrapped around her shoulders, eyes bright, watching.

Pain sizzled through his shoulder. A medic’s voice cut sharp: “Stay with me. What’s your name?”

“Liam.”

“Okay, Liam. Keep talking.”

He wanted to rewind thirty minutes. To trust his gut, not the rain. To say no.

“Almost there. One, two—”

Air. Rain. Sirens full in his ears. They slid him out, strapped him down.

Faces haloed by flashing light hovered above him.

He turned his head and found her in the storm. Christine met his eyes, chin lifted, smirk sharpened into silent satisfaction.

Then another shape moved fast through the rain.

Broad shoulders, stride sure. His father.

Bruce.

Not to him. To her.

He touched her shoulder like unlocking a safe he’d staked everything on. She leaned in with practiced gravity.

“He tried to kill me, Bruce,” she sobbed, voice breaking perfectly. “He couldn’t stand that I told him no.”

The lie slid smooth, rehearsed.

Bruce bent, voice hard and sure: “Don’t worry, Christine. I won’t let anyone hurt my daughter.”

The words hit colder than the rain.

His stretcher jolted forward. Christine’s eyes stayed locked on his, her mouth tilting with quiet triumph.

The ambulance doors opened.

Darkness closed around him like a hand over a lamp. The last thing he saw was his father’s back—turned away, shielding her—while Liam lay torn between truth and the rules of a game he hadn’t known he was playing.

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