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Holly Potter and friends 3: Killer on the loose

Summary

Holly is going to her third year at Hogwarts. Dursleys take it too far and Holly runs away. She then learns from her friends, that there is a killer on the loose.

Genre
Fantasy
Author
M15AV20
Status
Complete
Chapters
13
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Holly's tipping point

Holly was in her bedroom practicing some magic and doing homework to Hogwarts. This practice involved learning to cast more powerful version of a normal spell also known as the Maxima version. Holly remembered, that Snape used the Maxima Reparo to fix the Slytherin common room entrance. She was practicing on Lumos. Vernon occasionally came in wanting to scold Holly, but she always heard him and pretended to be asleep. Eventually she mastered the technique.

Next day

In the evening, Vernon's sister, aunt Marge came to visit. She was the meanest of the Dursleys. Holly hated her with her full heart. Holly asked Vernon: "I need you to sign this. Don't read it. Just sign it. It's something to school." Vernon said: "Maybe later, if you behave." Holly said: "Is it that hard to write one word?" Marge heard her and said in a mean tone: "You ungrateful bitch. My brother is too good. If she ended on my doorstep, it would be straight to orphanage." Holly said: "That would actually be kinder." She whispered to herself: "Fucking bitch." Vernon ordered: "Take Marge's suitcase upstairs."

At dinner Holly as usual was the slave bringing everyone everything even though her hands hurt. After dinner Dursleys had nothing better to do than just insulting Holly and her parents. Marge asked: "Where did you send her Vernon?" He answered: "To the St. Brutus. It's a top-notch reformatory for hopeless cases." Marge turned to Holly. "Do they use whip at St. Brutus?" Holly answered: "No, they use modern and more efficient methods." Marge continued: "Interesting. I hate those sentimental bluffs, that even the brats, who deserve it shouldn't be beaten. You shouldn't blame yourself for what became of this girl. It's hereditary. Bad blood comes out. What was her father doing Petunia?" Holly called out: "Soldier!" Marge said: "I wasn't asking you!" Petunia said: "Nothing, he didn't work, he was unemployed." Marge added: "That's more like it. He was also probably a drunk." Holly began cursing: "STOP LYING YOU WORTHLESS FUCKING CUNT!!! FUCK YOU ALL!!!" Marge wanted to beat her into unconsciousness, but then she started to inflate. Holly was still furious. Vernon became worried by what was going on. Petunia and Dudley froze in place.

Marge inflated more and more. Her necklace split and buttons on her blouse began shooting out one by one. Two hit and knocked out Dudley and another hit and turned on the cuckoo clock on the wall. Marge was screaming and calling out: "Vernon! Vernon, do something!" Vernon stood up and Marge's dog bit his leg. Marge was now floating around the ceiling and was moving towards the main door while screaming. Vernon was trying to get to her while the dog was holding onto his leg. He grabbed her hands. "I'm holding you Marge! I'm holding you Marge!" It was for nothing as it was bringing him and the dog in the air, so he let go. Marge flew away. Vernon was begging her to come back.

Holly stormed into her bedroom and let out as many curse words as possible. She then packed her suitcase, put on her Slytherin T-shirt and leather jacket and decided to run away. As she was going down, Vernon confronted her. "GET HER BACK HERE!! MAKE HER OK IMMEDIATELY!!" Holly yelled at him: "FUCK YOU AND YOUR FUCKING WHORE BITCH SISTER!!" Vernon tried to assault her and Holly cast: "FLIPENDO!" Vernon was knocked back, did two backflips in the air and fell on his fat face. Holly spat on him and went away. She went towards the Granger house while Marge was still screaming and flying around. Holly called out to her. "Shut up you fucking whore!"

After a while she had to rest. She sat down next to a playground. Street lights began flickering and the things on the playground started moving. Holly was becoming uneasy. She heard rustling in the bushes and when she looked there she saw a large black dog. It barked at her and she fell. At that moment a blue double decker bus with words "Knight bus" on it appeared. It stopped right next to Holly. A young man in conductor uniform was standing at the door and read from a paper: "Welcome to the Knight bus. A rescue vehicle for witches and wizards in need. My name is Stan Shunpike and today I'm going to be your conductor this evening." He looked at Holly. "What are you still doing there?" Holly said: "I-I. F-fell." Stan continued: "And how did you fall?" Holly said: "It wasn't on purpose." Stan said: "So come on in. We're not going to wait here forever." Holly was still looking at the bushes, but the dog was gone. She went inside the bus, while Stan took her suitcase.

Inside the bus, Stan printed out a ticket for Holly. Inside were a few other people. Stan knocked on the driver's cab. "We're going Ernie." A decorative head hanging from the ceiling said: "Yeah, take it away Ernie. Buckle your seat belts, it's going to be a bumpy ride!" The driver started the engine and freed up the brakes. The bus got moving at insane speed immediately. Holly had to hold onto the poles around to not fly around. Stan said: "What did you say your name was again?" Holly said: "Didn't." Stan continued: "And where're you heading?" Holly answered: "The Leaky Cauldron pub in London." Stan laughed and said jokingly: "Heard that? The Leaky Cauldron pub in London." The head said: "The Leaky Cauldron huh? Hey if they have a pea soup, you better eat it before it eats you. Hahahaha!" Holly asked: "And muggles don't see us?" Stan laughed: "Muggles? They don't se anything do they?" The head added: "No, but if you jab'em with a fork they feel!" The bus was speeding away and the head called out: "Ernie! An old woman right in front of us!" Ernie stomped on the brakes and the bus stopped instantly launching Holly forward and hitting a window. The head began counting: "10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3 and half, 2, 1 and 3 quarters. Yahhh!" And the bus launched forward again.

Stan was reading some Daily Prophet news and Holly noticed a photo of a criminal there. "Who is it? That guy." Stan was surprised at her question. "Who is that? Who is. . . That's Sirius Black. Don't tell me you never heard of Sirius Black." Holly shook her head. Stan explained: "He's a murderer. Got himself locked up in Azkaban for that of course." Holly asked: "How did he escape!?" Stan explained more: "Well that's the question there. He's the first to have managed it. He's a great supporter of You-know-who. You heard of him didn't you?" Holly nodded. "Yeah, about him yeah."

The head called out: "Ernie, 2 busses right in front of us. They're close Ernie! Ernie, we're almost on top of them!" He stomped on the brakes again and pulled some kind of lever. It seems to have bended time and space. The bus changed shape including the people inside to fit between the 2 busses. Once they were out, it returned back to normal. After a few seconds, they were at the pub. Stan said: "The Leaky Cauldron." The head said: "The next stop Knockturn Alley." Tom, the innkeeper came in. "Ahh, Miss Potter. Finally." Holly went outside with her suitcase and the Knight bus sped away.

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