Inkitt
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Sweet

"I’m not sure why there is not reviews. This was a very sweet story. The tenderness the author shows as the relations between the step siblings change was honest and heartfelt. This isn’t a dirty/smut book. This is a real story with all the feels young people would go through experiencing this type of feelings. The additional assault in the story really addresses true life issues high school and college age kids face. Well done author. There are some grammar errors, a couple places where the wrong name is used and paragraphs are repeated, but does not distract from the story."

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Continuity Errors but Good Read

"There are some errors with paragraphs, scenes, lines being repeated as well as later parts of a scene written like it forgot about previous parts but overall entertaining read. Like the other review said, do not go into this thinking it will be full of sex, it’s not. The closest thing is 2x and then at the very last paragraphs but not even fully. Some parts could be sped up or spent more time on, interesting character decisions (like the parents), but read if intrigued!"

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