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"Loved this! Had a bit of everything in it ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿป "

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Heart warming

"Such a lovely heart warming sweet love story that made you carve for that kind of soft romance in your life.... โ™ฅ๏ธโ™ฅ๏ธ"

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Blurred lines

"The lines between love and obsession blur with the force of Adrian's fiery possessiveness. I love his fierce protection of Elena and his willingness to fight for her and burn everything in his path. Masterfully written as it captivates the reader, drawing you in until you become a participant no longer spectator and you are forced to take sides in battle against the norm."

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Guilty of Loving You

"Amazing story! Enjoyed every part of it! Gorgeously written!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘"

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Love, unbound.

"We hardly know the age difference between the two. Apart from that it's interesting."

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Enjoy the book

"This is such a nice story to read. Love adrian โค๏ธ"

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Great read!

"This was a great love story! Wish there was a little bit more background on the main characters to understand certain events but overall it was very good read. "

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Wow

"Elana a law student... Damien untouchable and wins every time. She quiet and gently and his ruthless and powerful. Tow people fro Different parts of the world but came together regardless of the ups and downs that they had to go through at end to become one."

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Love at 1st sight.

" At 1st l was like this is some weird obsession, but as l read along l realize this is love at 1st sight. Powerful. Thank you Author. One love and blessings."

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Guilty of Loving You

"This is a book that you just canโ€™t put down once you have started reading it. This story has you feeling like youโ€™re travelling the journey with Elena and Adrian through all the twists and turns, highs and lows. It leaves you with a contented smile and feeling happy and believing that true love still does exist. A fantastic read and I would recommend it to everyone. It is brilliantly written and well worth reading. "

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Guilt of loving you

"A romantic lovely history, Adrian ruthless, collected seem impenetrable, succumb at Helena shyness, invisible personality the love for her almost destroyed him getting out of the turmoil with the help of his best friend and family...Helena have a weak personality been always managed and manipulated her...but faith and strength reunite them again a lived a beautiful life. "

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Hmm not a fan of the characters

"I am not sure about their character development. Elena is never really independant, is never seen as an adult, not even by Adrian first refusing her to go back to work. She goes from being controlled by her parents to being controlled by her husband. I would have loved to see her break free from her parents rather than him searching for her. Also, the sex references and her constantly being ashamed of it feels very teenager. Dialogues feel repetitive when they happen."

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