What is your opinion?
Out of bounds
"Short but so far very sweet have loved reading every chapter so far "
Out of bounds
"This is a good short story with a nice easy- sort of rom-com for adults, kind of. It will give you the feels as far a short stories go. I wish it was a few chapters longer however. I especially like the part where the male lead was not the typical "i liked you but I stayed away because i respected your brother" type. Definite recommend."
Out of bounds
"Firstly i like that it's a short story. I hate when a book has over 50 chapters and I stop reading for that. It's sporty and I noticed you wrote like a guy when in the guy's pov. I like that, not too emotional which is rare and especially because the girl is the sporty one. I also like that even though she is sporty, you did not make her boyish and kept her feminine. this is rare too. The story itself is heartwarming and like a romancy-sporty feel and the combo is nice. There is not much I disagree on because it's your writing not mine- though I would have developed the Maya-elena romance a bit... like stretch that storyline more.I also noticed that many authors develop a habit of describing the leads within the first chapter- like physical appearance... Idk. Out of ten, I give you 9."
