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Pulled in

"A beautiful story that pulled me in as I read more and more, the twists and turns and the final growing together - well written and heartwarming."

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Remarkable love story

"The story is perfect. The characters are relatable, interesting and lovable. I enjoyed their individual strength. Calum's steadiness and Adrians devotion and passion. Their relationship development is amazing. From rivals, through fighting themselves to deep devotion. I love the spicy scenes too. They are really explicit, with a lot of anticipation and build up. Really hot. Terrific reading experience. 🤩❤️👍🏼 "

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The Keeper And The Striker

"Great story, amazing characters. Thanks for giving me the opportunity to read this book."

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This book is amazing

"I loved the writing style. It was everything, and the plot was amazing and well put together. I loved the character development throughout this story. I don't know how to describe it, but all I know is that this book was amazing. 10/10, would recommend"

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The Keeper and the Striker

"On of the best written stories I've read. If you're a lover of the "slow burn" this is the one for you. I hope there is a sequel for the upcoming year."

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Wow

"I am so captivated by this narrative. Cannot wait for Chapter 31"

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Spicy!

"Love the story mine from beginning to end!! Great writing!!!"

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Warm

"Not the usual story, has warmth and feeling"

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Warm

"Not the usual story, has warmth and feeling"

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Warm

"Not the usual story, has warmth and feeling"

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Warm

"Not the usual story, has warmth and feeling"

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Warm

"Not the usual story, has warmth and feeling"

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Solid

"This book has a perfect amount of ups, downs, and intrigued. It’s very good and I would definitely recommend it."

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Easy Guy

"The plot is compelling and very well written. While the author does an excellent job of vividly describing the characters’ feelings throughout the chapters, I found myself wishing for more interactive dialogue between them."

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The striker and keeper

"Such a good read. Thank you so much........................"

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Better and Better

"I have read another fine story by TK, so was eager to explore this one. It started a little slow, with a certain amount of repetition of some gestures (posing, Adrian's wisecracksa) and vocabulary (there's gotta be more words than smirk for a smirk). But the plot has enriched and, more important, so have the characters. Both Adrian and Calum are becoming complex. I look forward to reading more. Thanks! Ch 14. This just keeps improving. "

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