Inkitt
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Love this book!

"I love how it goes along with the first book like they always do and the plot is great. The characters are great. Loving this book. Can't wait to the end"

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Paid in kind

"Looking forward to reading more. Drip your talent!"

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Paid in kind: Owned by power

"Strong dialogue and powerful imagery! I found this hard to put down. "

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Strangely compelling

"Enjoyed this more than I thought I would. Would like to read more"

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Paid In Kind - Owned by Power

"Lovely Story, thank you for sharing... Can't wait for Part 2"

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Paid in kind

"I enjoyed how the characters evolved showing their strengths and simultaneously their weaknesses. I am waiting for more. A book two..... Or maybe even three to see how Zane and Obsidian leaving their father's hold on them, with the three sons overpowering the old man. Hopefully Zane and Obsidian will find some love too"

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Writing skills

"Your story was so touching I loved how the emotions unfolded naturally and left a lasting impact. what inspired you to write something so heartfelt and beautiful? "

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I hope everyone gets their just desserts

"Invested in the story please keep it up."

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I like the character Dante because of his protective obsession, and also I would like to see that dominant and powerful and humor nature in Zorya. I like to see her claiming and showing those bastards that she’s the real deal.

" I like the character Dante because of his protective obsession, and also I would like to see that dominant and powerful and humor nature in Zorya. I like to see her claiming and showing those bastards that she’s the real deal."

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Interesting

"It's great. "

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