Under the Scars of Yunnan

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Summary

“Two strangers. Two scars. One encounter that changes everything.” Xiaolin is twenty and comes from a poor village in Yunnan, China. When her brother dies and her father falls ill, she sees no way out. A French stranger, Rami, promises her a better life. But in France, her dreams collapse—violence, debt, abandonment, and a scar that changes her fate. Wandering the streets, Xiaolin struggles to survive. In a massage parlor, she meets Kenan, a mysterious man carrying scars of his own. Slowly, their lives intertwine—in survival, in vengeance, and in a fragile romance that might either save them… or destroy them.

Genre
Romance
Author
Guen Dy
Status
Ongoing
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

Chapter 1: Under the Rice Field Mist

The village clung to the mountainsides of Yunnan, its mud-brick houses scattered along the slopes as though daring gravity to pull them down. Terraced rice paddies stretched endlessly, rippling in waves of green and gold, shimmering beneath the morning fog. Life here moved at its own pace—slow, steady, bound to the sun, the rain, and the rhythm of the fields.

At dawn, the men descended toward the paddies, tools resting on their shoulders. The women followed with baskets full of vegetables or laundry bound for the river. Barefoot children darted through crooked stone alleys, their laughter carried on the damp air. The elders sat in the shade of crumbling walls, long pipes in hand, watching the world drift by just as they always had.

Amid this simple, unforgiving life was Xiaolin. She was twenty, her delicate beauty out of place in the village’s roughness. Her features seemed made for smiling, yet her eyes already carried a quiet weight. Each morning, she walked to the children’s shelter, a worn wooden building where a dozen little ones spent their days. Some were orphans, others were left there while their mothers worked in the fields. Xiaolin dressed them, tied their hair, soothed their tears. Her soft voice was often enough to calm the restless. People said she carried her late mother’s generosity, and her father’s grit—though illness had now left him frail. To the children she was a sister, sometimes a mother. To the villagers she was proof that beauty could bloom even in poverty.

That morning, as she fastened little Lanyan’s jacket, the courtyard fell still. The children stopped running, their eyes fixed on the village entrance.

A stranger walked down the dusty path, a bag slung across his shoulder.

“Nǐ hǎo?” he called, hesitant, like a tourist unsure of his words.

The children erupted in laughter.

Xiaolin stood frozen. The man looked twenty-five, maybe older. Brown hair framed his face, a neat beard trimmed along his jaw. Behind his sunglasses, his eyes caught the light, warm and sharp. His faded T-shirt bore bold letters: NEW YORK.

He waved at Xiaolin. She returned a polite smile.

“He’s funny,” Lanyan whispered, tugging her sleeve. “I saw him earlier near Li Wei’s shop. He bought me candy.”

“Oh? Then he must be a kind tourist,” Xiaolin murmured.

Usually, foreigners who made it this far into Yunnan were generous and passing through. That’s all she thought of him.

She was wrong.

His name was Rami. He came closer, ruffling the children’s hair before stopping in front of her.

“Hello… do you speak any English?” he asked.

Xiaolin nodded slightly, motioning with her hand to show she spoke very little.

“That’s okay,” he said with a smile. “With this”—he pulled out his phone—“and a decent internet connection, we can still talk.”

He opened a translation app and kept going.

“My name is Rami. I traveled here through Xi’an, then Kunming… It’s incredible!”

Xiaolin gave a small nod, her lips curving faintly.

“Do you work here?” he asked, still holding the phone.

She nodded again but was already tightening Lanyan’s jacket. Without a word, she took the girl’s hand and slipped into the nearest alley toward her home.

She didn’t look back.

After all, she thought, she would never see him again.

She couldn’t know that behind those tinted lenses, the young stranger’s eyes were already fixed on her with a hunger he would no longer be able to hide.