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Brilliant.
"Like a mini movie it itself. Caught me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end. Excellent writing and will be now reading the rest of your stories Did have to question whether the gold justified kidnapping kids and holding them ransom while they hunted down the mall but that's my wonder not in a fault with your story."
Very well-crafted scenes
"I found the opening scene very well crafted and engaging. It sets the tone for things to come. Her internal dialogue and her dilemma, to be or not to be, as to whether she should dig deep or not to resonated with me. I am very intrigued about Sahiba's husband and how she will take her discovery forward. Very excited to read the next chapter."
