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Emotional roller-coaster

"Raw, passionate, spicy and an emotional roller-coaster. Beautifully written, infuriating at times but such a sweet love story. Would love to see a bonus chapter or book 2 of them as adults. Thank you so much for sharing it with us to read. Loved it! ❤️"

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Absolutely loved it!

"Such a wonderful book! Everything was perfect: the characters, the setting, and the outcome of each confrontation, whether good or bad, along with the absolute unconditional love of Paige's parents. I am excited for Alfie's story! ❤️🩶"

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Love wins

"I love a book that finishes and involves many stories."

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Faking it

"Enjoyed reading this story loved the characters. Story line good writing "

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All-consuming

"I know it need editing but Erin do it! This is so good. I couldn't put it away and the intense feeling keeps lingering - it was that impactful. DV, especially involving parents and without showing remorse for their acts cut very deep. You portrait really well how far loyalty for a parent goes and Cal calling Christopher dad even after all of this. This story is a gem Erin. Well done. "

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Faking It

"I love it! I enjoyed reading this until the very end. The deep conversations and running emotions plus the beautiful storyline made this novel highly entertaining. This is highly recommended.👍👍"

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Good book

"Bit too much angst. The pig chapter was very funny "

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Can’t put it down.

"The story flows so well that you get caught up in it. You connect with the characters as they feel so real. I can’t put the book down while I’m holding my breath that it all works out in the end."

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Emotional

"It’s so true how Callum is afraid of not being deserved. And Paige is really immature and their growth show in the book and this is very nice to acompanhes. Really liked the book and was in tears in lots of chapters, this is how good your writing is! "

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Faking it

"By far the best story I read on this app so far. It’s fun, I laughed my ass off at the riding pig part, it has list, love, hurt... all of the things that keep you invested to reach the end"

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It’s like a proper tv series

"What a journey... I’ve started to read and after a while I’ve noticed how long it is and get a little scared. But it was good, or great even. There is drama, and laughter, and English slang that makes everything more natural. I loved this character, I hated them, didn’t understand them at times at all and wanted to throw my phone away just to get back to reading few hours later. Highly recommend 💚."

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Such a great love story! But spicy..

"3/4 the way done w/the book, and regardless of how it ends, it's wonderfully written! This book hits you w/ALL the feels!! "

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Emotional

"This book will take you on an emotional journey but it’s so worth it! "

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I LOVED THIS!

"My new favorite book!!! Loved the characters, the story and the writing! Such a great book! I laughed, I cried and I screamed a few times!! Such a special story! Everyone should read this!!"

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Good Read

"Great story! I liked the depth of the characters and their mental and emotional struggles"

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Really enjoying it so far

"I’m hooked! I keep checking to see if a new chapter is out. Think this is one of the best books I have read on here. Can’t wait to see where it goes! "

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Great

"Good story"

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Loving it so far

"This is the first rugby based story I've found, and being a Kiwi girl, I had to read it. So far, I've enjoyed it... I can't wait for it to be finished!"

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Faking It

"I like the plot of this novel and the characters"

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Immersive

"A few grammar errors and missed words. But overall a good book. I can't say I like how frustrated they get with each other. Constantly lol. But it's a good read. This much angst is just not normal lol"

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