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Fall in Light

"Zorknot demonstrates with this story's structure the process and interconnections of life: Past, present and future....things eaten and when....family members and how....all impacted the selection of the last meal. The theme of connection is very clear. Death walks with artists. . The protagonist was an artist of his own life; his life was informed by Death. How was he absolved by Death?"

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Fall in Light

"Original idea which is something that is hard to find these days. Moved quickly which helped the reader feel how fast time was moving for a man about to face execution. I liked it and it held my interest."

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