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"I have been engulfed in storytelling for life. For years, I've immersed myself in the finest stories available in various forms—books, manga, visual novels, anime—gearing up for a grand aspiration: to create a novel that deserves to be among their ranks. I genuinely think that Olympia is that book. This is my magnum opus. Over the last year, I have been engaged in careful pre-production, creating a universe that I aspire will be a truly astonishing work of fiction. This is not a tale that confines itself. Seeking a dark, sci-fi universe featuring a thoughtfully designed power system that incentivizes creativity and intelligence? You’ll will find it here. Do you want an expansive, high-fantasy, propelled by a profound and complex mystery that will continually reshape your understanding of what you believe you know? You will find it here. Would you like to follow intricate, smart characters as they fight not only against deities and a manipulated reality, but also against their own inner struggles and deep-seated traumas? You will certainly discover it here. I’ve striven to combine the aspects of story telling I love most. psychological complexity, expansive world-building, intense strategy of a death game. All into a unified, impactful, and memorable creation. Now I can't guarantee you that my execution will be flawless every time, but I assure you that I'm completely committed for the long run, and I will work diligently with each chapter to learn, grow, and provide a narrative that deserves your attention. Olympia is a book that aims to appreciate your focus. Every piece of evidence is important. Each aspect serves a purpose. So just read. Trust me. Olympia will reward you for it. This is an amazing start to an ambitious series! Lucien is a captivating main character, surrounded by a lively cast who all feel alive in a descriptive, original, and interesting world. I'm excited to see where it goes! "

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