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Dark and Intense Hatef***ing!

"If you don't like dark, intense, relentless and degrading hatefucking then maybe this is not the story for you. But if if you do...🔥🔥🔥"

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The millionaires pet

"Very good. I was hoping they were free. So now I wait for the finale I hope. Man this is some sick shit"

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The millionaire’s pet

"Wow the twist at the end is superb "

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Repetitive

"There was nothing really new. Repeating the same questions the same stories the same answers. You go to the next page and it is just like the one before. You may get two different pages. I feel it could have been avoided if the writer would have read what was already written. Don't write until something fresh comes to mind. "

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No finesse

"Just brutality and cruelty. Not very entertaining. "

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