Final Touch by Soro Yukai at Inkitt
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Final Touch

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Summary

Summer vacation was meant to be normal, but for Emily Spade a camping trip takes a murderous turn... Emily only has days to escape... The camera light is blinking... Do you see it?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
5
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Prologue: Sky's Fall

School had ended two days ago, and the house still smelled like celebration—pizza boxes stacked on the counter, half-deflated balloons drifting across the living room floor, and Leo’s glitter-covered graduation poster taped crookedly to the fridge. Emily had retreated to her room after the last guest left, headphones on, music loud, trying to drown out the noise of summer beginning.

She wasn’t ready.

Her sophomore year had ended in a blur of exams, hallway drama, and a quiet ache she couldn’t name. Everyone else seemed thrilled—freedom, sleepovers, lake days—but Emily felt like something had been left unfinished. Like the year had ended mid-sentence.

Now her family was going camping.

“Three nights,” her mom had said. “Just us. No phones. No distractions. We need this.”

Emily had nodded, not because she agreed, but because arguing felt exhausting. Her dad had already booked the site, Leo was bouncing off the walls, and Claire—her mom—was in full planning mode. Emily packed slowly, dragging her feet, stuffing clothes into her duffel with the enthusiasm of someone preparing for exile.

She didn’t hate camping. She hated pretending everything was fine.

The morning they left, the sky looked strange.

Not stormy. Not dramatic. Just… off. The clouds were too still, the light too pale. Emily stood at her window, brushing her hair, watching the trees sway without wind. A bird landed on the fence and stared at her for a long time before flying away.

She turned on her music.

The drive was long. Leo sang along to every song on the radio, his voice cracking on the high notes. Claire kept checking the map, even though the GPS was working fine. Mark, her dad, drove in silence, his fingers tapping the steering wheel in a rhythm that didn’t match the music.

Emily stared out the window, earbuds in, letting the music fill her head. It helped. It always helped. The lyrics wrapped around her like armor, softening the edges of the world.

They stopped once for gas and snacks. Emily grabbed a soda and a bag of pretzels, then wandered outside while the others browsed. The air felt heavier here. The trees taller. She looked up and saw the clouds again—still too still.

She turned up the volume.

At the campsite, everything looked normal. A gravel parking area, a trail leading into the woods, a clearing with a fire pit and a picnic table. Their tent went up quickly, Leo helping with the poles while Claire organized the food. Mark disappeared into the trees with a folding chair and a beer.

Emily sat on a log, watching the shadows stretch.

The forest was quiet.

Not peaceful quiet—empty quiet. No birdsong. No rustling. Just stillness.

She turned on her music.

That night, they made hot dogs over the fire. Leo told a story about a haunted playground he’d read about online. Claire laughed too loudly. Mark stared into the flames like they held answers.

Emily listened to a playlist she’d made last fall, full of songs that reminded her of walking home in the rain. She watched the trees. Something moved between them—just a flicker. A shape. Gone before she could focus.

She didn’t say anything.

Later, in the tent, Leo fell asleep instantly. Claire read a paperback novel. Mark snored softly. Emily lay awake, headphones on, staring at the ceiling of nylon and stars.

She dreamed of music.

Not her playlist—something older. A melody she didn’t recognize, played on something broken. It echoed through the trees, weaving between branches, pulling her forward. She followed it in the dream, barefoot, until she reached a clearing.

Someone stood there.

Tall. Still.

Wearing a deer mask.

She woke with a jolt.

The tent was dark. Her music had stopped. Her phone battery was dead.

She lay still, heart pounding.

It was just a dream.

The next morning, she didn’t mention it. They hiked to a nearby lake, skipped stones, ate sandwiches. Leo found a frog and named it Gerald. Claire took pictures. Mark didn’t speak much.

Emily kept looking at the trees.

That afternoon, she wandered off alone. Just a short walk. She needed space. Her music was back on, a new playlist—instrumentals, soft and slow. The forest felt different when she was alone. Bigger. Older.

She found a tree with strange markings—scratches, like something had clawed at the bark. She touched them. Cold.

Then she saw it.

Across the clearing.

Someone.

Standing.

Wearing a deer mask.

She froze.

They didn’t move.

The mask was carved wood, antlers wide, eyes hollow. The figure was tall, dressed in dark clothes, hands at their sides.

Emily stepped back.

The figure tilted its head.

She ran.

Branches slapped her arms, roots grabbed at her feet. She didn’t stop until she reached the campsite, breath ragged, heart racing.

Claire looked up from the fire. “You okay?”

Emily nodded. “Just… got turned around.”

She didn’t mention the mask.

That night, she didn’t sleep.

She kept her earbuds in, even though her phone was nearly dead. The music was her shield. Her anchor.

But the melody from the dream returned.

Soft.

Broken.

Familiar.

She didn’t know the song, but it felt like it knew her.

The next morning, she told Claire she wanted to go home.

Claire frowned. “We’ve only got one night left.”

“I don’t feel good.”

Mark didn’t argue. Leo pouted.

They packed slowly.

Emily kept glancing at the trees.

No one else saw the figure.

No one else heard the music.

But she did.

And she knew—something had changed.

The sky hadn’t fallen.

Not yet.

But it was watching.

And Emily was listening.

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author

Emily’s encounter with the masked figure and the haunting melody makes her fear and unease gripping and palpable By the way this is quite fun so will you tell me if you will make a new chapter of this or are you working on some other topic

a year
author

I just finished your story, and I’m completely amazed. The emotional flow, the way you describe moments, and how naturally the story unfolds, it’s simply beautiful. I love how every character feels purposeful and alive, and the tone stays so consistent throughout. It truly leaves an impression. Do you already have ideas for where it’s headed next?

10 months

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