The Astor Heiress

Jkind12

30 chapters read

The Astor heiress

"Wonderful story! Don’t think all the bad language was necessary just a little too much."

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Desuma

27 chapters read

The Astor Heiress

"Great read, Anton is a god. What is now needed is the second generation follow up- I can just see all the twists and turns of the new generation growing into their heritage and legacy! Please,🙏🏼 author Nero!!!"

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cpet99

5 chapters read

The Astor Heiress

"Loved this story, great characters and wonderful story line. "

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"I love all your books and honestly think you’re an accomplished author. The only one thing I didn’t quite like about this one is the frequent use of ‘our Lord and Saviour’ but that’s because I’m a Christian but I do understand that I can’t force my religion on others but I’m just giving my personal opinion. "

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jlbeauty

24 chapters read

Astor Heirress

"Can’t wait to read the rest. I just love Pip! "

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Elena

30 chapters read

The Astor Heiress

"Fantastic book. I shed a few tears, and I laughed. A beautiful story about true love."

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Good one

"I love The prescott family :) "

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Martine

24 chapters read

Mon avis

"Beaucoup trop de putains. "

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Reii

0 chapters read

The Astor heiress

"I really don't like how Jesus's and God's name are used in this book 😕, it's really disrespectful."

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mlkdn

21 chapters read

Why so many italics?

"This could've been much shorter. It's too drawn out — I'm all for a long story but not enough happens here to sustain its length. It starts getting repetitive pretty quickly, and even the sex scenes begin feeling boring because it's just the same over and over. How many times can something suddenly snap in Anton? How often do he and Kat get wrecked? It's harsh to say but I couldn't even bother to count. I've read a lot of the writer's work at this point and have mostly really enjoyed them but I have also noticed that some of the characters have begun to bleed together because they sound the same. It's not even a matter about having a recognizable "style" since the writing is often polished and funny, but here the characters literally sound the same, so much so that if you took away some identifying details you might not be able to tell which story you're reading. Plotwise: meh. This is a very talented writer with a deep bibliography, but this one's an unfortunate miss. "

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