What is your opinion?
Writing skills
"I was really moved by your story the way you captured emotion and meaning made it feel so real. what inspired you to write something so genuine and touching?"
Great Story! Keep going!
" As my feedback, I am beng an honest here since we are both writer and wanted to grow from authors/writer point-of-view. There is only a minor need to changed as I point in comment button next to your pragraph to improve more. You can also make a open and close quation on the dialogue so its easy for the readers to digest and have a break too. Some lines need to check :) but I'm attracted to ICE that I forgot to say it, hahaha. Over All : I love the story, Raven, Ice, Thanin, Dante and the rest has a strong charater build and as I said; I love ICE the more. I know giving a life to your creation takes alot of effort and time. So take it slowly and think while creating them in you imaginary world like... 1. Who is talking? (Raven-first person POV, Ice-second person PO or a third person like GOD telling your story) 2. Did the Character Motivation is clear enough? If no, then re-route some scene where the choice is going to (which you already made it beautifully). Hope my feedback help you and I'm grateful that you read my book too. I'm looking forward on the upcoming chapters of your story. "
Beautiful
"This is actually the best ever,you such a good writer, the plot, twist and everything coming to learn from you "
Heated
"Very compelling story "
