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Just wow

"I really enjoyed this book the suspense is great and i am just intrigued to find out what happens next "

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The Captain’s Secret

"The story line was good. However, it was extremely confusing with the inconsistencies. Clara’s last name changes 5 times. When they are in the cell Damien suddenly has a wedding ring, he’s not married. The story starts with him being the Captain of his soccer team, at the end he’s giving commands to the bomb squad as they call him “Captain”. Then there must have been teleporting because Clara is in the cell with Hale one scene, next to Damien outside in another and back and forth. Hale was cuffed and somehow by the end, not having been released he’s brawling and trading swings with Damien. It was tough to get through. "

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Yjub

"I am good and you? Food is also very beneficial to the body. Don't you think so too? Sure sure sure!!!!"

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