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Alphas betrayal and claim

"Wow, great plot twist in this first book. I hope her first mate gets what's coming to him and he realises what a monumental mistake he has made. I couldn't put this book down and I'm head straight for the next one. Great writing."

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Schönes Buch

"Lese es sehr gerne "

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The fated

"Changed the review, I didn't read about multiple mates if I'm honest. "

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Great so far

"I like this so far but it has definitely not been erotic, which is what I wanted. Hopefully it gets steamier from here.."

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Great story

"Emotional but not overwhelming. Good pace. Looking forward to finding the next story. Hoping it weaves the story together a bit more, answers some of the cliffhanger questions"

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One man’s throw away is many men’s treasure

"This is a whirl wind each chapter demanding the next to be read. Loved every one. Can not wait to read the next book"

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A good read

"Looking forward to the next book"

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Awesome

"Great book "

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An Emotional Rollercoaster of Betrayal and Hope

""The Fated Series" completely captivated me from the very first chapter. Evandra's heartbreaking betrayal by Jalen, the very man who was her fated mate, is portrayed with such raw emotion that you can't help but feel her pain and despair. Her journey from a powerful Luna to a vulnerable, banished rogue is both terrifying and inspiring. The author does a fantastic job of making you root for her survival. Just when you think she has hit rock bottom, a new twist arrives with the introduction of Tristan, the Alpha of the Melting Moon Pack. The immediate mate bond between them adds a thrilling layer of complexity and hope. Is it a second chance from the Moon Goddess or another cruel twist of fate? The character development is superb, especially seeing the cracks in Jalen's resolve, which adds depth to what could have been a simple villain. This is a perfect read for fans of possessive Alphas, strong heroines, and stories about overcoming immense pain to find strength and love again."

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Good read

"This is a good story. A slow burner & with great character building. Not at all predictable & really interested to see where it goes"

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