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Super immersive

"While it wrapped up quickly, the imagery, tone-setting and premise of this story were so captivating. Just generally very well-written. :)"

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Love it

"I really enjoyed it because I like horror and the entire plot"

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The Ashmouth Plague

"I really enjoy short reads, hence enjoyed this one too. It is scary to think that it is something that can actually happen since humans can be so careless. I was right there with the characters and was internally screaming 'no!'...😁"

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What a great Story!

"It reads smoothly, and you get straight to the point. Really well done. Thank you for shariing your story."

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Short story: Interesting plot

"It is such a breath of fresh air, getting out of the usual romance trope and actually getting trapped in a world a filled with ash. Loved the plot. Loved the writing style. loved the dialogues. And I actually loved the symbolism and the tiny details. It is not an easy job to portray such things in such short words. The author is really talented. I hope to read more of your stories!"

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A short but good read.

"The author has given a short but very telling tale here about the dangers of things that take form via the minds of scientists in their laboratories. With short stories like this, it is very hard to write a review without spoiling the plot. What I will say is give it a read if you like post-apocalyptic stories, it won't take you more than ten minutes and you won't regret it."

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Great short story.

"Interesting idea—it actually reminds me a bit of The Last of Us. The plot twist with the cat was great! One thing that confused me, though, was the inconsistency around the infected: at times, you mention they turn to ash, while in other parts, they seem alive but zombie-like. "

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Waiting

"I enjoy reading this book, can’t wait for the new chapters to be release "

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