Inkitt
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Wow

"White lies , no matter how small of a lie it is it’s still a lie. Great short story kept wanting to read more "

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A cautionary tale.

"Lies, even white lies, are wrong, and in this short story (it could have been published as one whole story instead of very short chapters), they are deadly. I don't want to give any spoilers, and it is hard not to do so when a story is so short, so I will content myself by saying I thoroughly enjoyed both the premise and the storytelling here. If you like bite-sized stories, as I like to call them, then I recommend this one."

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