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A fun little love story with DEATH

"This story caught me by surprise. It sounded quite dark from the description, but actually it's turning out to be a cute love story between death and one of her "culled." The death in this story is feminine and playful. At first, she reminded me of an older, almost vampiric figure. But now it seems she's a bit younger and more shy and playful than I thought. Reminds me of the old Neil Gainmen comic; "Death, the high cost of living." Especially when I got to the part about her wearing an ankh, I like this portrayal of death as a vibrant young woman who has a fascination with this mortal man and wanted to give him some happiness before...well...you know! Great story so far, the writing is also quite beautiful! "

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Death is our friend

"I can see this is going to be epic, so I'm gonna keep reading and probably get obsessed "

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