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What I prefer in the story

"The story is good but I would have preferred it if Noel is a top and Theo is a bottom, and Theo always gets shy when they do IT"

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Amazing story

"The rivalry was short lived but the rest of the story was truly heart warming although it was fast forwarded every now and then."

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