Inkitt
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Temptation Island

"I wanted to also add that I think that it needed to connect the two sweet hearts at the end to consumate their relationship since that was constantly talked about all through the island experience and also have them go on a date. "

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Fun to Read

"Fun to read, made my overnight shift go faster! "

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Fikzozo

"I love the realistic setting of the story and the mix of characters made it very entertaining. Very enjoyable read would recommend it to all the romantic readers out there. "

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Temptation Island

"I am thoroughly enjoying this story. At first I was wondering how they can make this work. Nice surprised. I am wondering if the grammar and spelling errors are really errors. Reading the story, I use U.S. English. I think the story is written in U.K. English, if that makes sense. It doesn't take away from my enjoyment of the story at all."

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Good plot but needs some more substance

"Love the plot but was thinking based on the tag words it would be more steamy. Lots of spelling and grammar issues"

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